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 eyy ni lai lai ...........eyy lai lai hehe haha!!! ni laii laiii PART 2.......!!!

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Posted on 11-03-08 8:49 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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THANKS to all the ppl who read my other thread... and gave comments and suggestions.....!!!I had posted this in my other thread but just wanted to create a new one .....!!!

This  goes out to SONA1, Spoken, Maaiya, _____, MCMXC, Maddog, Girly GirL, Grunge83, Nepali Nari jyu ....!!!!!

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mero sathi ko twakey bau

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part -I

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It's always 12:00 am midnight . Kamal Bahadur Thapa is not home. He always come home drunk and quite late. Muna Thapa who is Kamal Bahadur's wife is always worried about her husband drinking habit. She never sleeps on time . She waits till her husband is home.Sometime she doesn't sleep as her husband don't arrive home. Kamal Bahadur and Muna Thapa got just one offspring from their 25 years long relationship. Sita Thapa who is my friend is the only daughter of in the Thapa family. Sita is not 19 years old.

 

Sita is my friend who goes to school and comes frm school back home with me. We are really close friends. We study in the same school and in the same class. Sita is really good student . I am just average in studies. But I am better at extra- cirricular activities.

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THE FIGHT NIGHT

One day I had to go to school all alone by myself. I waited for Sita to come to the chautarii where I used to wait for her to come and we would go to school together. Well I waited for her for more than half and hour. There were students passing by me and they were asking meh if I am going to school or not? I would just ignore their question and not listen to them. I waited but then I knew that I was going to be late for my school. So, I thought of heading to school. I had to walk about 1 kilometers of distance all by myself as all the students goes to school using the same way that I use might have been to school already. I knew that I would be late for the school assembly. I just walked lazily. Luckily I got to school before the first period started.

The day went quite boring. I was all alone the whole day. I had no concentration in class. I got quite a few nice comments from the teachers. The school was over finally. I had a long breathe to take after the school was over for that day. I went home and had my khaja. After that I tried to call Sita. As I was curious why she wasn't present today. I called her but she never picked up her cell fone. Then I called her home number. But nobody received the fone. I tried many times . All my efforts to know what really happened to Sita was in vein. So, I decided to go to Sita's home and see her.

Sita's home is about 10 mins away frm my house. I had no problem walking 10 mins as I was worried about what happened to my friend. So, I rushed to Sita's home. I reached there within couple of minutes.

When I reached there. I saw Sita laying in the bed. I was surprised to see her on the bed . Moreover the main door of the house wasn't locked. It was just open. Anyone could enter the house and none would know it. I could see Sita trying to close her eyes and sleep .

As I saw her on the bed. I went nearby her . I wanted to know know why she wasn't present today in school. As I talked thing changed all of sudden.

Kavita- Sita what happened to you ? And why is the door open?

Sita- Well nothing I just had head ache, fever and minor body pain.But I am far better that I was this morning . [She replies meh back with smile in her face. To just pretend that she's fine.]

Kavita- [ I could see her feeling uncomfortable while she's sleeping and could see her breathing not in a normal way ] Well are you feel good . Yu seem to be finding hard to lay urself on the bed.

Sita- I am fine. Well I find it always hard to rest on this bed. This bed is little awkward and uneasy to rest on.Well that's why I am feeling uncomfortable. Yu don't have to worry I am fine.

Kavita- [ I could see a bandage on her forehead and arm.So, I was curious to know what happened actually] Hey, can you tell meh why you are wearing those bandage?

Sita- [ Replies to my question in rather awkward way. I could sense that she didn't want to say what happened actually] I ... fell off the chair last night. I was trying to fix the bulb of the varanda. At that time i tripped off the chair and i got hurt on my forehead and arm.

kavita- How are you feeling now ? Don't tell meh it doesn't hurt or don't act. Tell me the truth.

Sita- Well why would I lie to you. I am saying the fact . I am feeling better now. I think I will come to school after couple of days of leave. Well could you write a leave application and give it to the Principal frm my side Please!!!

Kavita- [ I couldn't say no coz she's my friend moreover she had injury on the right arm .She uses her right hand for everything mostly as she's right handed. So, didn't feel hesitated to say that I would help her.] yesh! Of course I'll write. Don't worry about it . You take care of ur health and eat on time and sleep on time. Well don't think about homework.

Sita- [ Replies with cheerful smile on her face.] Sure, I will .

Kavita- [ I was curious to know why she didn't pick up my fone call.So, asked her ]Well I called you several times but yu didn't receive my call? I guess you were sleeping at that time. [ All of sudden I give the questions answer myself.] Well don't worry you don't have to say why you didn't receive the fone call. I can understand. Yu are sick and have body ache . Yu should take rest. Now I'll go . I'll see you back in the school when you are 100% fit.

[ita just smiles back to meh and gives meh a gesture assuring that she'll be fine soon.]

It was already 7:00 pm and I had to rush back home coz I had to do alot of homeworks . And I had to help my mom in the kitchen. So I thought I should say goodbye.

Kavita-Hey don't think too much and don't get worried you'll be fine and where is Papa and mama. [ I couldn't stop asking coz I didn't see them around the house. And I am too talkative]

SIta- Well they went to the market to do some shopping. I guess they'll be around here around within half and hour.I just told them to leave the door open as I won't be able to go there and open the door.

Kavita- Well stop hiding things frm meh. Tell meh if anything happened with ur legs or not. [ I know it was stupid question to ask as she was sick and this is my stupid bad habit that I can't stop asking about things.]

Sita- [ She is not at all annoyed by all my question but just answers all my questions with patience and full of smile in her face. But she didn't question me any question not even a single] Well nothing has happened to my leg it's just due to the pain that I have on the back. I can't hold myself sometimes. So, it's better I leave it open. AM I right, kaviee ?

Kavita- Well yeah you are right but don't you fear to leave the door open?

[ I always make sure the door is close proper at home. So, had some unfamiliar expression on my face I guess that's why Sita's facial expression changed ]

Sita- Well I know it's scary but I am bold and strong enough to face the fear. And feel no pain when I have to face anything that comes as an obastacle in my life.

[ I could sense some kind of extra energy being stored within herself. I felt so good to see that in her.I was late so I decided to go home. And say goodbye ]

Kavita- Hey, it's been quite late , I have to go now. I was worried about you so much today. I now feel good coz you are feeling good. I'll see you soon in school. I'll be waiting for you. And I'll come to see you on weekends and other days if possible.

[ I waved my hand to her before leaving her house and said goodbyee. She too waved her hand as a gesture of goodbye. Then I came back out inside the house to say goodnight and sweet dreams.]

After leaving the house I could feel that my heart is heavier than it was the whole day. I could sense some kind of cold air going through my mind making meh feel cold with all that I am thinking. As I saw my close friend laying on the bed trying to rest but she wasn't able to do so. I kept on thinking what might have happened. I thought that she might have lied me. And also said to myself why would she lie.Why would she make a joke of the pain she is having righ now. I kept on thinking if she said the truth or not...!!! I was on my way home. It took 24 mins for meh to get home.

-to be continued.....!!!!

 

ROCKEND AKA rocks or rocky

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Posted on 11-13-08 6:57 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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See spoken here goes my char wata comments for rocky,,

Good going.... Rocky simply ROCKS!!

Good going....... Rocky simply ROCKS!!

Good going.....Rocky simply ROCKS!!

Good going.....Rocky simply ROCKS!!


 
Posted on 11-13-08 7:12 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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rock, u can be a insensitive kid to a writer as well.:P:P

good job.

in jest.

 


 
Posted on 11-13-08 7:51 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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spoken-  thanks for ur comment.. last ma comment nai garoo mora ley hehe!!!

comment gardeyna vaneythiyoo comment garii chodyoo ho ho hehe haha!!! THanks for ur comment hai SPOOKEEEY...!!!

SONA1 - Hey Ssweetiee!!!! THANKS so MUCH for ur COMMENT...!!! hehe THankS as always for Sweet COMMENT..!!! hehe  ONe more time thanks for the 4 wata comment...!!!

 ANGELEYES - well I am not Surprised at ALL when you said KID to meh ...!! hehe  well THIS KID might be a SMART kid ..!!!

 

THANKS ALL FOr ur comment.. Part III is comming soon... TiLL then keep waiting.. !!!

parkhaii ko pida ma bhujna sakchu...!! tara parkhaii ko faal meethoo huncha sathi... vanney pani ramro sanga thaha cha malai....!!!

 

ROCKEND  aka rocky or rocks...!!!!!


 
Posted on 11-14-08 9:12 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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hihihihi hohohoho mora rock! when did i say i wont comment to your thread??? after all sona that was like forced(by me) comment jasto lagya........ c u did comment after me
aba maile bhanda paida char wata commet gareko bhaye ta ma ni boliko ta pakka manchhe bhannne thanthe aba chanhi sankai chha ki kaso?
 
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 I would like to thanks all the ppl who gave comments!!!  hehe !!  Thanks for ur support and thanks for reading and hope it keeps on going in the coming days.!! well there is nothing that will drive you crazy in this part hehe!!! sorry for disappointing you guys...!! THANKS !!!

 

 

part III

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I am half asleep still. I can hear my mom’s loud voice. Mom doesn't stop yelling and shouting at me if I don't wake up. So, I decided to wake up. I was about to wake up my mom keeps on saying stupid things that really annoys me.

 

Mom-" Hey!!! Kavita wake up!! You lazy ass!!!! It's already mid-day. [As if it’s really mid day. She was yelling at me. I don’t like ppl who exaggerate things a lot l.] “I saw your friend today when I went to the temple. And you are sleeping her. Wake up it’s already midday."

Kavita- Arrggg...!!!! Yes yes I heard it a million times. I am going to wake up. You don't have to yell at me like that early in the morning."

Mom - “What did you say? Can't you keep ur mouth shut? Don't you know how to respect ur elders?"

Kavita- "Oh!!! This old lady is boring. I am bored hearing the same old radio. Could you please stop it? It's annoying!!!!"

Mom- “Hey! What did you say huh? Say it again. [I could see her face turned red with anger and furiousness.]

Kavita- “Nothing, give a break.”

 

[I felt it's useless to reply her back as it's always the same with her. Every morning I don't have good time. And I always find my morning boring as usual. So, I though it’s better I stop replying to her stupid comments and questions. I went to the bathroom to get fresh. Wow! I am feeling so romantic early in the morning and again wanted to go back to sleep. I didn’t want to wash my face or brush my teeth either.]

 

I had no excuse and I wouldn’t be able to go back to bed again. I guess I won’t be able to see the romantic dream again anymore. But also I had really amazing feeling going on in my heart. I am feeling romantic more than ever till today.

 

I can hardly find any day that I haven't fought with my Mom. I don't know why it's so. I guess it's made to be so between us. But I love my mom alot it's the way she talks that I don't like. I think this is because of the generation gap our way of thinking and perceiving things don’t match at all. Well I don’t know if I am right to say that it’s due to generation gap or not. I think now I should stop thinking stupid.

 

[I was brushing my teeth looking myself at the mirror. I could see the brightness in my face even though I don’t look fresh at all. I stared at the mirror at times just to make sure I am still dreaming. I was at times pissed as I didn’t see the face of the prince charming but my face that’s boring to look at when I was looking in the mirror. ]

 

Its breakfast time for me and I am eating it in rather slow manner. Usually I used to be quick. It would take about 5 minutes for me to finish my breakfast but today it’s totally opposite. I did finish eating today in 15 minutes and I was having my breakfast all alone dreaming…!!!

 

Tring…Tring…..!!! Tring……Tring..!!! Tring… Tring..!!! Tring  Tring..!!!

 

[There is the fone ring. I find the ringing tone of the fone annoying. I used to feel like throwing away the fone when I hear the fone ringing but, nowadays I am kind of used to it. I think it’s more of a useful thing that an annoying toy that’s just distracts ur mind from our work.]

 

Mom- Kavita !!! Kavita !!!

Kavita- Yesh I am doing my homework. [Actually I wasn’t doing my homework. I had already finished my homework and was thinking about my dream last night.]

Mom- “ Can you please pick up the fone”

Kavita- “ Okey..!!”

Kavita- “old woman” [I said it in a lil lower voice so that she won’t hear me.]

 

Fone conversation:

 

Kavita- hello! Who is speaking?

Sita- Hey kavita! How are you? It’s me Sita.

Kavita- hey! How are you doing? You had ur breakfast or not?

Sita- yesh I did.

Kavita- “Well I want to talk about my dream that I saw light night. But I can’t coz my mother is yelling at me all the times when I am on the fone.

Sita-“It’s okey we’ll share it sometime later when we’ll be back to school. Well did you write the sick leave application that I told you to right yesterday?

Kavita- “Oh! Shit…. I forgot that. I’ll write it now. Well don’t worry.

Sita- “Thank you!!!! SO much!!! I just wanted to remind you. Well have a good day. I should rest now.

Kavita- “Hey NO sorry! No thanks! Okey …” “Don’t say it anymore. I don’t like it. Don’t worry.  You take care of ur health and hope to see you soon. Get well soon.

Sita- “ Okie…. Till then byee!! Take care

Kavita – “O.k Bye…!!!

 

[. I took a deep long breath after I hung up the fone. ] “AAAAaaaaahhhh………” [A real long breath.]

 

“Kavita!!! Kavita..!!!”[There was my mom’s extra energy being used to call me out that made me scared.]

 

I screamed out loud.

 

And my mom hearing my loud voice comes quickly to the living room.

“Are you okey?” asked my mom. I replied,” Oh! Yeah I am fine. I just got lost in nowhere. Mom was surprised. “Lost nowhere what do you mean by that?” mom asked me. “Well nothing. It’s just nothing. I just went staring at nothing without knowing that I am staring and being lost.”

 

“Well now you go do your home work and be ready for lunch in about an hour time.”

 

“Okey “I had to reply back saying Okay otherwise I would be questioned and I’ll be having a fight with mom which I don’t want it right now.

 

[You know what I got scared by the loud voice of my mom. I was scared for real as the silence broke all of sudden. I think she was going to ask me to do some help but she forgot to ask me for the help due to my unusual screaming. And I was staring at nowhere and was talking to myself before I screamed out loud. ]

 

Now I had to write an application letter. I looked at the mirror and made funny faces of mine for a while and then I was back on track of myself to write the application letter to the principal on behalf of Sita. I wrote the letter and wrote that Sita needed 5 days of leave. I felt good after I finished writing the application letter.

 

And I feel like it’s true “friends in need are friends indeed.” This quote struck my mind and I will keep this always in mind.

 

[Lunch went well and so did the school. I submitted the leave application of Sita to the principal.]

 

Wet Eyes with tears

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[4 days went by so quick. I felt like it went by like in one blink of eye.]

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It’s the 5th day or the last day of Sita’s leave from the school. In between we weren’t in contact at all as I was busy on my own. So, I decided to call Sita and now how she is doing.

 

[I called Sita and we had a very short conversation on the phone.]

 

Sita- Hello!

Kavita- hellow! How are you sita!

Sita- Hey kavita I am doing okey and you?

Kavita- I am doing gr8. I feel good that you are doing alright and how is ur health. I wanted to know if you want some more leave days or not. If you want then do let me know I’ll send an application letter to the principal on Sunday.

Sita- Hey it’s okey as for now but I am not feeling comfortable with my neck right now. I am having lil difficult time talking today. So, Can you come tomorrow to mine. Tomorrow is Saturday.

Kavita- “Well o.k sure. But what is anything wrong with ur neck or what.”

Sita- “I dunno what has happened but I just feel very uncomfortable while I am talking. Okey see you tomorrow. Thanks for calling.

Kavita- Okey. Sure! Goodnight.

Sita- Okey goodnight. See you tomorrow. Don’t forget to come okey.

Kavita- Okey I won’t.Byee..!!!see you tomorrow!”

Sita- “ Bye!!”

 

 to be continued.....!!!!

 

 ROCKEND aka rocks or rocky......!!!!!

 

Last edited: 14-Nov-08 07:43 PM

 
Posted on 11-14-08 8:36 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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 mora rockend aka rock or rocky kasto belama to be continued gareko ???dhut...kya excited bhayera padhi rakheko belama...............masu bhat khai rakheko belama baluwa le villain khele jasto to be continued re
 
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Its going good rocky!!!!!keep it coming broda!!!!!!!
 
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spoken- THANKS mora...!! ahile chai first vayecha comment diney ma lu badhai cha... hehe!!! aba 4 wata comment aaucha SONA ko .. I am waiting for her comments...!!!

 

grunge83- Oyee heroo kata gayap yaar timi..!!! THANKS!!!  you have been following the story.. THANKYOU so much for ur comment...!!! IT makes meh feel gr8.. !!!

ROCKEND aka rocky or rocks...!!!


 
Posted on 11-16-08 5:39 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am sick so.... I won't be back for couple of days...!!!

keep waiting for part IV...!!!

it's nice part and it will make you cry....!! I guess...!!

see you all in part IV

ROCKEND aka rocks or rocky...!!!


 
Posted on 11-17-08 9:02 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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hey Rockyyyyy bro,

u were sick awww.. dear brother get well soon!!!...

I am loving this story of good pals, helping and really caring for each other ...  "frens in need are frens indeed" love this qoute.... I am missing my very good childhood fren for the moment... Thanks for the beautiful story... cheers to you.....

looking for more at the same time take care of urself... part 4 can wait till u are well ;)

kind regards

NN


 
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Wa rocky wa..... Gajabko story and unique style.    Story to b continued vanepachhi chahi    ris uthyo malai rocky....... La la chhito chhito lekhau hai arko part.  Hope u b alright soon.


 
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Rocky bhai daami dami.
 
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NN diju...!!! THANKS.. alot for ur COMMENt..!!! ur comment is sweet like you Diju...!!!

Sabaiko Satru- Hey mitra... thanks for ur comment hehe!!! CHitoo lekhney rey part 4.. Huss huncha...!!! keep waiting till then ...!! THANKYOU..!!

uptowngal- Diju finally you had time to read my thread ... hehe!!! thanks for ur comment...!!

ROCKEND aka rocky or rocks...!!!


 
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well suck it up rocky and complete your freakin' story already...jk take your time

hey nnjyu where've you been? and how's ronald weasley's brother charlie's dragon doing? last time i heard from him he was sick with syphilis...how is he doing now?

 
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muiii chuuiiii- THanks for ur comment..!!!  suck it up .. and complete ur freaking story rey ......!!!!!!

timro ronald weasley's brother  ko answer NN jyuu ley dinu huncha hola... when she's back in my thread or personally.. hehe!!!

KEEP waiting .....!!!

 

ROCKEND aka rocks or rocky...!!!


 
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Hey MCF jyu arramai??

I am doing very well thanks MCF jyu... ani yea i m back in dracula's land once again from good holidays... as for that dragon (u mean Hagrid's baby dragon, Norberta)... that poor darling was sick(teo pani syphilis o dear god) I dint know i hope she is doing well.... i will update on that once i get further notice on her... Anyways MCF jyu u take care i think u have some papers to sit thats what i understand from our last convo... so all the best till then later!!!

regards

NN 


 
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Roc brooOOOOOoooOOOOOo  Great goin ..........Keep it comming hai......ANiiii   ke chha broda??? Me Im just busy trying to pull up a miracle this season. Well Ill be back to SB once this nightmare is over LOL Till then wish me luck bro..........and please do say hi to all frens in SB.........
 
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magiee- all the best !!! myaaan...!! do ur best none can do better than best....!!!! nightmare rey !!!

thanks for ur comment one more tyaam...!!!

 

ROCKEND aka rocky or rocks..!!!


 
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yo magiee bro ni kata kata sapaile sodheko sodhei chha ba afu ta jaile agadhi hunchhu kalle ni sodheko ni hoina sodhne kura ni ayena la bro je jasto kam chha tyaslai tyahin chhodera SB ma hajir huna auna parya lau bro yo suchana payeko batoko myad bahek 1 din bhitra hajir huna aunu hola anyatha SB ko niyam kanun bamojim kada bhanda kada karwahi hune chha. astu....
yespali ta sonako comment ajhai ayeko chhaina ni kina hola..........last time ta yeutai comment 4 choti diyeko thiyo yespali ke gardo rahechha hera
m....
ani rockend aka rock or rocky mora..................khali biramiko bahanama sudhie ra football herdai basne hoina khurukka arko part post garne? dherai dhilo bhayo bhane ta ma to be discontinued...........ahile nai bhan diyeko chhu
la sabai lai good morning good evening ani good night ni la ja.......afaile chhanera liu...
take care


 
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spookeeey- oyeee let maggie bro take his time to pull the miracle on his favour... then after that he'll be back with all the colours that we missed in SB.

Okeey... wait for few more days SPOOKey I'll be back with part 4 .. THANKYOU..!!!

ANi sona Ko comment... WEll I am waiting for her COMMMENt..!!! Ke thaha akai patak 10 wata comment diney ho ki SONA ley..!!!

ROCKEND aka rocks or rocky..!!!


 



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